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etharei
Nov. 2nd, 2010 09:46 am (UTC)
Re: Here In The Dark, 27/??
OMG MY SMILE FEELS BIGGER THAN MY FACE :DDD

I swear I didn't breathe in those first couple of paragraphs. It felt like such a moment of ~revelation (in more ways than one) and maybe I was a little nervous about how light would change things. But of course Tommy's just been a silly git and now he knows he's been missing out on beautiful fucked-out Adam all this time. UNF MY BRAIN IS JIZZING FROM THE IMAGES.

Love the little details, like the eye color and the blushing, because they make the scene feel more real, in the crazy random shit you notice. FUUU YOU'RE GONNA GIVE ME A FUCKING-WITH-LIGHTS-ON KINK. I also LOL'd at Adam still trying to be a toppy bitch.

By the end it was kind of hard to see around the HEARTS IN MAH EYES. I love noticing how people change and develop in a story, and the Tommy after the sex is clearly different from the Tommy at the very beginning of this fic. And it feels like a natural growth, like of course all of that lead to here. So lovely to see Tommy being comfortable with the kissing and the cuddling and LIGHTS ON OMG.

So hoootttttttt.
neednotwant
Nov. 2nd, 2010 09:47 am (UTC)
Re: Here In The Dark, 27/??
*UNINTELLIGIBLE DOLPHIN NOISES*

ohmygodseriouslytho. nggggggggh bottom!Adam.

I SUCK at commenting because I just want to go UHHUHYESYESEXACTLY to everything etharei says :') This is an amazing story bb. And it's sucked me in. I love the progression and the tenderness just gives me massive hearteyes. I can't even. THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS.
prettybaby666
Nov. 2nd, 2010 10:22 am (UTC)
Re: Here In The Dark, 27/??
Squee! I only just found this I read it all in one shot! Lovely! I think I may have squealed when he turned on the light.. wait.. according to mum I did. heh.
thrace_adams
Nov. 2nd, 2010 11:44 am (UTC)
Re: Here In The Dark, 27/??
DAMN this is all kinds of awesome. I'm not sure if I've commented before but OMG this was beautiful. Tommy finally turning on the light and just wow. I love this so much.
xxvikixx
Nov. 2nd, 2010 01:20 pm (UTC)
Re: Here In The Dark, 27/??
*___*
untamedfilly
Nov. 2nd, 2010 01:21 pm (UTC)
Re: Here In The Dark, 27/??
This is incredible. THIS is how it should be when two people are together early on in a relationship, especially when one of those people is just discovering and exploring their sexuality. It's so real, so touching, and scary all at the same time. Tommy is not the same person he was at the beginning of this, and while Adam has struggled with his patience, he never faltered. The two of them have grown as a couple, and you have written this in such a beautiful way.

I'm not sure I breathed at the beginning of this, but when Tommy turned on the light, there was only the sound of my gasp. The visuals were clear in my head as to what Tommy was seeing and feeling, and who knew that a little table lamp could change one person's perspective forever.

Bravo my dear... Please don't stop writing this! <333
(Anonymous)
Nov. 2nd, 2010 04:02 pm (UTC)
Re: Here In The Dark, 1/??
So I figured if I'm going to drool over your stories, I should comment on them properly from the start. Part 1..this gripped me from the first words. I can feel the angst pulling at me making me crave more. I wanted more as soon as I read this. Grr my phone will not let me post under my lj account..I am not anonymous, I am nozxemagirl007.
wynkat1313
Nov. 2nd, 2010 06:06 pm (UTC)
Re: Anywhere For You: 8/8
that was incredible. hot and sweet and lovely and interesting all together. Very very nice!
technicolornina
Nov. 2nd, 2010 06:28 pm (UTC)
Re: Here In The Dark, 27/??
OOOH *noms on the lovely comment* Thank you! ♥
technicolornina
Nov. 2nd, 2010 06:30 pm (UTC)
Re: Here In The Dark, 27/??
technicolornina
Nov. 2nd, 2010 06:31 pm (UTC)
Re: Here In The Dark, 27/??
I've seen your name on my stuff before, but not sure if you've commented on this one ♥ Glad you're enjoying!
pyrosgf
Nov. 2nd, 2010 06:49 pm (UTC)
Re: Here In The Dark, 27/??
I've been reading this since like part 7 I think... and I've been hesitant to comment for whatever reason.

Adam's hair is spread in an inky pool against the white sheets, most of his freckles all but invisible against the dark flush across his cheeks and nose, mouth open, his head thrown back and exposing the line of his neck like he has absolutely nothing to fear. His eyes are closed, and Tommy can just see his lashes, stained dark by night after night of heavy mascara, fanned out against his skin before Adam registers the light and opens his eyes.

First off this imagery is beautiful.

He slides his hand from the back of Tommy's neck up and through Tommy's fringe, pushing it out of his face, looking, studying, and Tommy wonders if Adam knows that when he's aroused he has sort of these green rings around the edges of his pupils that aren't normally there.

Also this part about the pupils... I love the little attention to details that you've put into this.

This has been magnificent, and the building of confidence that you've portrayed through this and his slow acceptance is just amazing. Kudos for everything you've put into it.
technicolornina
Nov. 2nd, 2010 07:02 pm (UTC)
Re: Here In The Dark, 27/??
Ooh, hi! And thank you ♥
blueeye01
Nov. 2nd, 2010 07:45 pm (UTC)
Re: Here In The Dark, 27/??
OMG *______________*

*chinhands*
nolechica
Nov. 2nd, 2010 08:37 pm (UTC)
Re: Here In The Dark, 27/??
Fabulous! He needed to see what he was missing.
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