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Glam Kink Meme Post #1

The Glam Kink Meme Post #1 is now open.

Have fun prompting, writing, reading, and feedbacking. :)

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(Anonymous)
Aug. 14th, 2010 02:26 am (UTC)
Silence 4/4
Adam thinks he’ll never be able to sleep that night, his heart aching and his mind racing, but close to dawn he succumbs.

Despite his exhaustion Adam wakes once briefly, only to be lulled back to sleep by the slow glide of a warm, gentle hand, stroking down the length of his back.

Adam sleeps through the bus rolling to a stop at their destination in the morning. He sleeps through the dancers waking and getting ready for the day. When finally he does wake, reality returns to him in a rush.

"Tommy?" Adam bolts upright in bed, looking around the tiny room. He is alone.

He has the presence of mind to locate his discarded t-shirt and boxer briefs from the night before, stumbling and cursing as he pulls them on, before bursting through the door of his lair into the common area of the bus. Sasha, Taylor and Terrance are seated at the table having breakfast and look up as he approaches. From their expressions, Adam realizes he must look frantic, but he doesn't care.

"Where's Tommy?" he says urgently.

Sasha and Terrance exchange glances. "He's probably on his way to the airport by now," Sasha says, her face full of compassion.

Adam shakes his head. "Airport -- what? What happened? Is it his dad?"

Sasha looks puzzled, then stands and approaches Adam, putting her hand on his arm gently, tentatively. "His father passed last night. Didn't you know? I mean, wasn't he here, with you . . . " she trails off, clearly embarassed.

Adam feels a sick, sinking feeling in his gut. Tears prick at his eyelids, and he sinks in to a nearby seat, running a shaky hand through his hair. "Oh my god. Of course." It all makes sense to him now.
spotthatcat
Aug. 14th, 2010 04:43 am (UTC)
Re: Silence 4/4
This was great, wow!! Raw and moving.
deliriousminuet
Aug. 14th, 2010 06:44 am (UTC)
Re: Silence 4/4
Wonderful! The emotions are so strong in every sentence of it, and the tension!
etharei
Aug. 14th, 2010 08:27 am (UTC)
Re: Silence 4/4
Wow. A blow to the gut and intensely hot. Great writing, excellent handling of the scene while keeping it very real and human.
thrace_adams
Aug. 14th, 2010 11:02 am (UTC)
Re: Silence 4/4
OH wow...this was really really powerful. All of Tommy's thoughts about Adam mixed up with his thoughts about his Dad. Really well done.
missis_norris
Aug. 14th, 2010 12:20 pm (UTC)
Re: Silence 4/4
WOW! It's wonderful - so powerful and touching.
Great fic!

Edited at 2010-08-14 12:21 pm (UTC)
(Anonymous)
Aug. 15th, 2010 02:39 pm (UTC)
Re: Silence 4/4
This was so incredibly amazing. So fucking blown away. The pace and the storyline were so emotional and really touching. So powerful and still very, very real at the same time.

Completely loved it! Unbelievable job.
Re: Silence 4/4 - tiny_dolly3 - Aug. 16th, 2010 06:15 am (UTC) - Expand
antigone921
Aug. 16th, 2010 06:37 am (UTC)
Re: Silence 4/4
Oh wow, this was fucking amazing.
(Anonymous)
Aug. 16th, 2010 06:53 am (UTC)
Re: Silence 4/4
This was so well written. So good.
(Anonymous)
Aug. 16th, 2010 05:38 pm (UTC)
OP Here
Thank you so much for filling my prompt! It turned out so much better than I'd imagined. There is so much emotion, and I love the angst.
dangerous_47
Aug. 19th, 2010 12:53 am (UTC)
Re: Silence 4/4
Awwww.

Still liked it. very nice.
nolechica
Aug. 19th, 2010 10:37 am (UTC)
Re: Silence 4/4
Ouch, very well written.
hannab2
Aug. 21st, 2010 05:57 pm (UTC)
Re: Silence 4/4
omg This was so amazing! Your descriptions were so perfect--the physical reactions but also the emotional turmoil Adam felt.
Really beautiful. I loved it so much!!!!!
vlredreign
Aug. 26th, 2010 06:43 am (UTC)
Re: Silence 4/4
Not not a person that thinks every one-shot needs a sequel, but this one does. I'd love to know what happens when Tommy comes back, because now they have this thing between them, and it's not going to go away.

And I love angst anyway, so thanks for that!
maggy_97
Oct. 31st, 2010 08:29 pm (UTC)
Re: Silence 4/4
I just had to re-read that, because I've got it stuck on my mind. And I realized I didn't comment before. So, I'll do now. It's awesome. I love it so much. It#s so pure, so emotional. Well done!

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